Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Crazy Mouse!

Okay, so I am at the library in the town that my mom's fiancĂ© lives, and it's absolutely crazy!  I try to move the mouse on the computer and it goes WHOOSH, way to the other side of the screen!  By the way, just so you know, I will be putting some pictures on here sometime, of stuff...and...stuff...probably my room, when I get all my stuffehz in it.
I have to save up 1,300 dollars...I also need a job.  Here is why I need to do that: The place my money shall go.  I want to get the one on the far left.  I have discovered that I very much like Macs.  They work better than most Windows computers I've used, though so far this one seems to be working well.  Yay!
I'm writing another book...who's surprised?  Yeah, me neither.  It's what happens when I'm bored in English class.  But shhh, don't tell Mrs. B, I don't want her to keep me involved :p  Aren't I a rebel?
I also need to work on editing my current book (Adventure of a Lifetime) because my mom won't.
I probably won't hire an editor for this one, because I can just ask myself the same questions he asked on The Unnamed Legend.  I'm a really good critic.  Especially when it comes to criticizing myself.  Like, last year, I got 2 Bs, and I beat myself up forever--and still do some--for one of them, because the only problem was that I forgot I needed Current Events!  I plan to do better this year, and make all As.  As of now I think I have all As, even in math!  It's a low A...but it's still an A!  And the first nine weeks is almost up!  Yay!
But yeah, about the questions, I'm meaning things like, "Is this supposed to be funny?  Uhhh, what are you talking about?  Why does this sound strange?  Where did you mention this before?  This doesn't really add to the story, I suggest removing it."  Things like that.  If I ask myself stuff like that, I can be my own editor.  NO MERCY!!!  Okay, maybe a little, but for the most part...NO MERCY!!!
Maybe someday I'll print it out and have some of my friends read it.
So far, with the story I've been writing at school, Anjulah (my friend and fellow classmate, the girl who I don't have to kick out because she isn't girly,) likes it.  Gavyn on the other hand criticizes it....
Granted, he has some right to criticize the first part, and it will be changed somewhat.  Right now the person doesn't sound like Gavyn, who he is based off of.  In the beginning it doesn't sound like him anyway.
See, there's three people I have based off of others...Devyn is based off of Gavyn (I had to have the y, because for some reason I like it...don't ask y....) Anjulah is based off of...Anjulah, and her name will probably be changed to Amber, if only I can remember to change it, and Kai is somewhat based off of me.  I also have a family tree for the bad guys, because it was so hard to figure out who's related and how and all that junk.  But I figured it out ^_^
Oh well, I gotta get to writing now.  Goodbye.
~Katie :)

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